Having Tea with Me

This, in my opinion, is one of my weaker works of poetry. It has already been edited and I can't figure out what else to with it; yet I don't feel too proud. Tell me what you think.

Love

Love is roaring
Burning hotter than sunlight
Withstanding deadly snowstorms
Love is purity
Beauty incarnate
Reaching past the highest peak
Love is universal
It intertwines us
Bringing happiness beyond time
Love will burn eternally
'Til all life vanishes
And begins anew

Written by: Julianne Micheletti 05/03/2015
Edited: 05/21/2015